Thursday, August 09, 2012

Review: A Feast for Crows by George R.R. Martin


A Feast for Crows is the fourth book in George R.R. Martin’s A Song of Ice and Fire series that takes a breather from the carnage inflicted on Westeros in the preceding novels, introducing new points of view (PoV) and setting a tighter focus on the politics and dynastic intrigues of the Iron Throne and those who seek to acquire or retain its power over others.  Released in 2005, it has received mixed reviews for its languid narrative and minimal pacing. Having listened to this on audio book, I have to concur that I took away little enjoyment from this novel as I had in the first three and was relieved when I finished it.

The biggest detriment to this novel is that its intended and extant structure hinders that of the overall narrative structure. Martin originally intended to transition AFFC with a 5 year gap after ASoS. Given the elements of Westerosi politics, the Essos infighting and supernatural threats looming this would necessitate a significant amount of filler or flashbacks to cover events that occurred over that time in order for the intended present situation to make sense to readers (i.e. the Stark children would be older). Due to the sheer volume of PoVs involved it demanded more and more span to be devoted to covering what has transpired with these characters, thus making the inclusion of flashbacks a tedious effort, with little gain. Frustrated by this, Martin scrapped 18 months of writing to set a new course by dividing the book into two books: with AFFC covering only those events transpiring in southern Westeros while A Dance of Dragons would continue in parallel to canvass the events in Essos and the North; as is well known now, this would prove just as fraught with problems for the narrative and to the dismay of readers. This would also bring the series to a total of seven novels.

With the omitted chapters of fan-favourites such as Tyrion, Jon Snow, and Daenerys Targaryen, AFFC continues its PoVs on Sam Tarly, Sansa, Jaime, Brienne, Arya, with new major ones added (Cersei) and a number of random ones interspersed to cover events occurring in the Iron Islands and Dorne. The novel lacks much of the intensity and magic of the previous novel with a rather slow pace focused on the political manoeuvring and scheming of the remaining noble Houses, which foreshadows the eventual collapse of the incumbent regime and presents a dire situation should Daenerys’ invade (whom no one takes seriously).  The repeated listing of innumerable characters, food and clothing continues unabated, and glossing over them (or ignoring in the case of the audio) hasn’t diminished my enjoyment or comprehension of the events transpiring in the story so far.   

A Feast of Crows does have some interesting sections but overall leaves much to be desired given the epic backdrop of the last three novels. Cersei’s chapters in particular attempted to portray a naive, spoilt, paranoid noblewoman attempting to hold onto power while it slips from her hands, but instead its execution only portrayed an amateurish caricature with stilted dialogue, and only served to make me despise her more (perhaps the intention). IMO, it feels more like a distraction, a side story that goes on and on but never actually contributes much and it is only with Dance with Dragons that I began to enjoy the series again. 

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